This review was originally posted at Goodreads on 14/09/2025
As he admits in the acknowledgements, a childless middle-aged man like Grady Hendrix is not the person you would expect to take on a novel about wayward girls, the name given to women who became pregnant outside of marriage in the days before abortions became legal in the United States in 1974. That said, as a childless, middle-aged man, I’m not really the kind of person you would expect to be reading a novel on that subject. However, despite having been a fan of horror novels since my teen years, I had yet to read any of Grady Hendrix’s work, despite having heard his name via various horror fiction podcasts over the years.
“Witchcraft For Wayward Girls” follows a group of girls who have been sent to Wellwood House, which has been perfectly positioned out in the wilds of Florida for parents to hide their shameful family secrets. This being the 1970s, attitudes are such that it doesn’t matter that most of these girls are under the age of consent, or that their pregnancies may have come from rape, or incest or abuse or a broken promise, it is considered their fault. Miss Wellwood and the team at the home make sure they are kept well aware of this and they are forced to work to pay for their upkeep and they are fed only a diet that the supposed doctor on staff permits and only then if they have obeyed all the rules set out for them.
The girls often rebel, but Fern and her new friends Rose, Holly and Zinnia, are encouraged in that by the travelling librarian, Miss Parcae, who sneaks them a book on witchcraft. Having tried an easy spell to get rid of Zinnia’s morning sickness and giving it to the doctor, they seek advice as to whether the book and the craft can help them further. But when you make an agreement with a witch, there is always a price that has to be paid and the girls start to have doubts. The cooks at the home, Hagar and Miriam, know a little something about how to deal with witches, but if they thought Miss Wellwood and her staff were making their lives more difficult, Miss Parcae is even more insistent and even more demanding.
Considering what he had written, this is a novel that has far more about the wayward girls than it does about witchcraft and it feels in many ways that he only added in the witchcraft elements to hang the story he actually wanted to write from. In some ways, the novel reminded me a little of the style Stephen King tends to use, in that there was a lot of time spent getting to know and like the characters before then visiting nasty things upon them. But despite the unpleasant situations they were all in thanks to the attitudes of the time and of their families and the lengths the witches would go to, the most unpleasant scenes all happened in the birthing rooms and there were moments that left me feeling very glad to be a man.
But as good as parts of the novel were, there wasn’t a huge amount of horror here and the scenes involving the witches were little that hadn’t been seen plenty of times elsewhere. I have no idea whether many witchcraft rituals do have to take place naked, but Hendrix is the latest in a long line of male writers to depict them that way and there was a bit too much focus on what their breasts were doing, which felt a touch unnecessary. Ultimately, whilst this was a novel that had some decent scenes and was a brave subject matter for a male writer to attempt, too much of the novel was inconsistent and patchy. Perhaps ironically, given what had happened to these girls, the novel felt like two ideas which had been forced together against their will and I can only assume from this that Hendrix’s other novels are better constructed and more original than this one for him to have gained the reputation he has.